BRAINLIEST
ENGLISH I : JOURNEY TO UNDERSTANDING : REVISION
Instructions: Using your essay in response to the unit's writing prompt, complete the following steps to improve your essay.
Introduction
Paste your hook in the space below and explain why it is an effective lead into your essay.
Paste your thesis statement in the space below.
Idea Development
Choose one body paragraph from your essay and paste it in the space below.
Highlight your chosen paragraph according to the stoplight approach:
Green = Topic sentence
Yellow = Example, reason, detail, or fact
Red = Explanation of example, reason, detail, or fact
Based on your highlighting, what are the areas of your paragraph that need development?
Incorporate one additional or different example to better support the controlling idea of this body paragraph. Paste the paragraph below and identify your revision by underlining it within the paragraph.
Choose one example and improve the explanation of it. Be sure your explanation shows how the example proves the point of the paragraph. In the space below, paste your chosen paragraph and identify your explanation revision by underlining it within the paragraph.
Organization
Paste two of your body paragraphs in the space below. Bold the transition at the beginning of the second paragraph. If you cannot identify a transitional phrase or thought, incorporate one at this time and bold it.
Choose one paragraph from your essay and paste it below. Bold the transitions within the paragraph. Remember, transitions are used between examples and between examples and explanations. If you cannot identify any transitions, incorporate and bold at least two at this time.
Conclusion
Paste your conclusion below. Bold the sentence(s) within the paragraph that prompts the readers to do something or think about something.
Identify what you have done to synthesize the message of your essay in this concluding paragraph.
So one thing i that before you write an essay, your idea should be well thought out and well knit. you shouldn't have to abort mission midway. Based on highlighting, a key should be made in the corner for the readers to keep in mind your sequence of headings which is extremely important. Examples solidify your statements and make sure the facts you have written are concrete. Organization makes reading way more easier and prevents readers from getting bored. In a conclusion paragraph, you reinstate the key points that are present in the work overall and its an excellent way to complete your work!
